tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1974164995805002945.post139749491274527624..comments2023-05-05T04:04:34.456-07:00Comments on Ramblings of a sundry heart: Gratitude For An Enemy: Part 5Kasperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08646977176996978224noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1974164995805002945.post-12598225289051979632011-04-06T03:57:56.530-07:002011-04-06T03:57:56.530-07:00Dude..just loved your style and the whole narratio...Dude..just loved your style and the whole narration. I am not a regular reader but your style kept me hooked and infact loved the concept which I kinda agree to.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />Would follow your blog from now on! :)abhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14112029795158178486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1974164995805002945.post-75009905369978726822011-02-19T13:16:39.312-08:002011-02-19T13:16:39.312-08:00wow...great writing...got totally hooked!!wow...great writing...got totally hooked!!Arpit Shahnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1974164995805002945.post-47210910556229933452011-02-12T09:59:29.564-08:002011-02-12T09:59:29.564-08:00I would like to add one more thing...that I found ...I would like to add one more thing...that I found the concept of the story really wonderful....it lingers with reader for long after having read the story. One realizes that even if a single event in our past had not gone the way it did..our today would have been very different! Thus it became possible to feel 'gratitude for enemy'! BEAUTIFUL!!Neeru Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12212199758485872998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1974164995805002945.post-22144988463013092672011-02-11T01:50:20.049-08:002011-02-11T01:50:20.049-08:00loved the writing style dude .. what you lacked in...loved the writing style dude .. what you lacked in terms of the story, u made up for much more in style .. <br /><br />but it's very hooking, mostly because it's so refreshing, so original .. <br /><br />of life and love, the kind we like best :)<br /><br />way to go mate .. i can see a very rosy future indeed :)Rakshithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08428845066879809134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1974164995805002945.post-24672096166282487552011-02-11T01:08:47.461-08:002011-02-11T01:08:47.461-08:00Thanks for being sensitive towards readers. ( i me...Thanks for being sensitive towards readers. ( i mean ..giving us a Happy Ending). Its always better to be a half glass full person. <br />On the whole it made a very good reading. keep it up!<br />A small request....in future plz proof read once before publishing, but if u really r short of time...it doesnt matter...its fun reading it raw too :)Neeru Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12212199758485872998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1974164995805002945.post-2287505411904501932011-02-10T22:22:42.741-08:002011-02-10T22:22:42.741-08:00Hey dude,
This is the most original writing style ...Hey dude,<br />This is the most original writing style I have seen in some years. The voice is authentic and good. Some of the medley thoughts, put in casually were gems - like the bit about 'significant.'<br /><br />Your actions, despite of being laced with hatred for me>>>>> There should have been another word used instead of hatred. It sounds harsh in a story that is very subtle.<br /><br />Also where ever you 'butt in' (like physically: lols' use italics. Spares the confusion.<br /><br />And can we have it in one go now that it is complete. You will miss many readers like that.<br /><br />Great stuff. You will go a long way. And this is not a doting poppy. Try sending it to New Yorker.<br /><br />All the best.<br />RavieGrey Inkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16851939772582108031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1974164995805002945.post-21643213650495128642011-02-10T21:25:53.549-08:002011-02-10T21:25:53.549-08:00Ah :) the joy of happy endings!
What about those ...Ah :) the joy of happy endings! <br />What about those short stories of yours that weren't published?? Waiting for them here at least..<br />Way to go dude. Good work. :)jiYahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03370830309651802967noreply@blogger.com